This is one of my poems from 2004 to 2006. I am really not sure what year it was. I found it and thought somebody may like it. Beware its not family friendly.
You like a red rose among so many white roses.
A queen bee among many worker bees.
The reason hustlas play every female til they find you.
The reason hustlas wake up 6 in the morning.
Come home late night wit a pocket full of money.
Gun Heart
You the motivation hustlas and jack boys feel 24/7 365 burning in dey heart, pushing dem harder for riches. The feeling dey have nothing to loss but everything to live for. You the back bone of a real nigga life. That one thing dat keep him from lossing his mind. A good woman, the type dat stand by her man side no matter what. The one woman, a real nigga can say I love you and mean it. Look into your eyes and see a future, making a family.
Having his heart and mind agree if any nigga try to stop it. Dat nigga gotta see the after life early. Good pussy aint hard to find but a good woman is. So when a real nigga find a good woman, a real woman. He never wanna let her go willing to do anything to keep her. The type of woman dats understanding and trustworthy. The type of woman dat let her man trap all day without calling him 24/7 asking where he at and when he coming home. A real woman knows her man don’t give a fuck bout da next bitch. He coming home to her and she got the house clean, hot meal on the table, and looking sexy is hell. She know how to treat her man.
This female can never be labeled his fuck-friend, girlfriend, main-chick, nor wifey. She meant to be his wife and he knew from the start.
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Wow! When you said it’s not family friendly, I thought you were kidding.
A different kind of poem about a real women. I laughed when you said the house should be clean, hot meal and looking sexy. I know some women say that was the old days and now times have changed and men also have to clean and make food.
I’m curious to hear what others have to say about this poem.
P.S. If you find that real women, please send her my way. Looking desperately for one, lol
My eyes! Too inappropriate! Just joking. You are a good poet. Have you ever considered writing a book of poems?
Nice poem Deneil,
I nver thought you’re a poetic kind of person. I like poems because they are timeless and at the same time entertaining.
lol, I tried to warn you. I’m glad you like it though.
Yeah, their are women that think it’s old days for them to cook and clean. I just know how to get them to do it.
I have no problem with cooking and cleaning myself. As men we should cook and clean once in a while to let women have their relaxing days.
I am curious to see what people say as well.
lol, I doubt you want a American women. Their the main ones saying that don’t want to cook or clean.
lol, thank you. I was thinking of putting together a ebook from all the poems I am going to post on my blog. Maybe 25 or so. Sell the ebook for $9.99 I am not sure yet.
ha ha ha. I think there is a virus and other nations are starting to follow the trend
Yeah, lucky my girlfriend is from Brasil.
Thank you. It’s one of many passions of mine.